Memorial Rules Suckup

Woohoo! 23 votes for me, and in less than 150 words! I've taken an early lead! (It could be 24 votes, but there ain't no way I'd vote for myself considering what a steaming pile of crap this is.)
<tongue firmly in-cheek>

Rocky McFadden runs a castle-like brothel in Transylvania specializing in catering to transvestites. During a recent raid by crazed Tcho-Tcho cultists, damage was done to a part of the building - uncovering a hitherto-unknown tomb in which lay an ancient Serpent Man who had, until being disturbed, been absorbing the sexual energies of the goings-on above, using them to create a "Time Warp" to bring his long-dead family back into the present. To complete this task, he needs only perform 23 sacrifices. Coincidentally enough, there happened to be 23 Tcho-Tcho involved in the raid. As the investigators arrive on the scene, most likely unaware of the problem and simply there to let off some dressed-in-drag steam after a pear-shaped op, the Serpent Man is completing the last of his sacrifices. He has neatly cleaned up the Tcho-Tcho presence, but now the arrival of his family must be prevented!
</special tongue placement>

Seriously, though, kudos Adam for the the memorial rules idea. I can't wait to see what people come up with in their real entries.

Marshall
PS: The memorial rules checklist:

SPECIAL LIZARD KING MEMORIAL RULES (2009 CONTEST ONLY):
1. Name dropping "McFadden" or the "Lizard King" gains entry 1 aditional
vote.
CHECK* (Rocky McFadden)*
2. Plots riffing cult movies gain 2 additional votes. (If you are riffing,
please state how and which movies you are riffing in a second e-mail if you
want to be sure to score the votes.)
CHECK* (Rocky Horror Picture Show)*
3. Plots using Tcho-Fu gain entry 3 additional votes.
CHECK* (Tcho-Tcho Raid)*
4. Use of “23” as a plot device and/or the surreal use of coincidences as
plot gains entry 4 additional votes.
CHECK* and *CHECK* (23 Tcho-Tcho, 23 sacrifices needed - Whattacoininkidink!)*
5. Plots credibly using Serpent People gain 10 additional votes. No just
making the bad guy a Serpent Man! If the bad guy is a Serpent Man, the plot
should reflect this as well.
CHECK* (Credible? Well, at least as credible as the rest of this steaming pile of words.)*
6. If an entry meets LKM rules 1-5, they will score 23 additional votes
instead of 20.
CHECK* (Woohoo!!!)*
7. My decision on an entry’s eligibility for extra votes is final.
CHECK*** (Well, not "check" per se, but it's not like I could leave it unchecked…)*

Credits

Memorial Rules Suckup was written by Marshall Gatten for the 2009 shotgun scenario contest. This entry has been recovered using the Way Back machine from the original DGML.

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